What's wrong Luke? The plot too complex for you. Seems to flow quite logically to me. Don't worry though, the story isn't going to follow me in my quest for monkeys. I think it's about time for you two Lukes to have a final throw down.
I forgot to mention, with the snow and the trees your last cartoon looked really South Parkesque. Maybe there's a job for you in illustration after JET.
Even South Park is better drawn than my crappy cartoon... plus they used high tech CGI programs to make that show. I only know how to use MS Paint. As for your feature length edition idea.. I think 4 panels at a time is about all I can take.